i start with alot things you could/should improve
BO/eco/others- unbalanced BO at the beginning (first mass stall, then energy stall), even mass overflow
- second factory was ready far too late, you had almost no units to protect your engies at the back (if he attacked)
- not enough factories to compete with the enemy's spam, also no t2 or t3 units
- very very late t2 and t3 (it's possible to start ravager spam at 8:00)
-i think i saw no TMD, a TML could have killed all your energy and also the ACU
gameplay- some engies were idle for a long time (at the beginning)
- no stationary anti air against the t1 bombers, mobile is much less effective
- you did not try to protect snowman from leon's land army
- the ML was sent to die
- you sent your units in a line into a large enemy force after the ML was killed, so your units died too
- build energy where you can protect it, not in front of your factories
- second ML was sent to death too, also the units after it again
- third ML was sent in, even though the enemy had his own ML and pds/units -> it died aswell
- fourth ML was sent in and died like #1 and #2
some tips:- get a BO or do some eco tests, so you won't stall that bad
- you will either need more factories or have to get t2 and t3 units
- get a t2 pgn fast, and take care of your acu... on this map, sniping is easy if your acu is at the front, snowman showed us. also be aware of TML or gunship attacks, you will need both AA and TMD
- counter what the enemy has - he had gunships and t3, so you will need flak and bricks
- don't attack with all you have (the ML) when you probably lose it, don't use it too reckless
- this map is good to snipe if you see he doesn't protect against it - TML snipe would have been really easy
- make combination attacks, together with your ally - when you attacked with 2 MLs and his army, you could finally do it
i add two replays, one is brainfart and me losing to t1 rush and ravager by luxun and voodoo,
the second one is an awesome game by BD/CC vs Congreve/Ubilaz
watch them, and learn from our failure and the awesome game by the others